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Wow..thank you all so much for all of the lovely comments. I'm so proud and happy that so many people have found this story to be enjoyable.
Please keep a look-out for my other fanfics :3
:heart: forever,

~Ribon

Title: Tantalizing
Fandom: APHetalia
Characters: Central focus on Germany, with Italy
Genre: Introspective, Romance, Angst?
Rating: T+ ((16 or older reccomended for highly...erm...homosexual themes XD...oh, and language too HAHA))
Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN HETALIA. That is all. And I'm glad in a way that I don't, lest the whole thing become a romance story. Y'know. More so than it already is, hahaha. All belongs to Hidekaz...ALL HAIL HIDEKAZ!
Warning: ADULT THEMES! SLIGHTLY SEXUAL THEMES! BL! SHONEN-AI! ((not quite yaoi, but...YAOI!)) SLASH! READ AT OWN RISK.
Total Word Count: 3,527
Total Pages: 12

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Okay, so here we go!! This story is rediculosly OVERLY long and verbose. I'm sorry to say it but, I think I got carried away. Heh, I've never been very good at condensing things...*sweats*
I really like the first part up to just after the fantasy...but then I just kind of feel that it got weak.
There really wasn't any plot line, other than that Germany was SOMEHOW, SOMEWAY going to end up kissing Italy FOR REAL in the end.
Ah well, please excuse any grammitical or spelling errors I might have made. Or, you know what?
Don't ignore them! Please, tell me where they might be so that I may be able to correct them!
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Funilly enough, the idea for this story just kind of poped in my head yesterday afternoon when I was *cough* cleaning *cough* my room. I'd picked up an old vocabulary card, and the word was "tantalizing". I suddenly was seized with the image of Germany and Italy sitting by the pool, the water dancing across their faces. So, I started writing. But, I really had no idea where to take it, so I kind of just let my fingers spew out words and string them together into a semblance of a story.
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In case you were wondering, the song that Italy is humming is Verbotener Kuss ((Forbidden Kiss XDDD)) by the Krautrock band Schandmaul. I reeeeally like Schandmaul~!

Hmm, I don't often see an Introspective!Germany like the one I wrote, I hope that I kept him in character and not too OOC!! Haha!

OH OH OH, ALSO! This is my belated fanfiction gift for the most wonderful of VUNDAHBAH lover of sexy Germans, :iconboomeranger:! Here you go my lovey!
See, I told you I didn't forget...just that I was a bit behind!! Heh!
AS WELL AS BEING A GIFT FOR BOOMERANGER, this is also my entry for the 30 kisses challenge...theme#15, Perfect Blue


I hope you enjoy the story, and please, please, please drop a comment! It would make my day!!
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zobelogna's avatar
Ugh, why the hell am I not watching you yet? XD
Also, what are you referring to when you say that "Valentine's Day?" Is it from one of the comic strips or is it a reference to another fanfic?